Advertising brings economic effects , some people think that it makes individuals unhappy about their life . Discuss both view and give your opinion
While advertising is thought to positively affect the economic, some other people have the contrary opinion that it disturbs their life. I will discuss both of these views in my essay below.
On the one hand, advertising benefits businesses and contributes to boost economic growth. Actually, many companies and big groups have been successful greatly in increasing the revenue and profit by using the effective advertising strategies. One clear example is the amazing development of McDonald’s, which has applied appropriate strategies such as advertising on TV, radio or distributing discount coupons for certain items to promote their brand and products. Therefore, they have the incredible evolution from only one small restaurant in US to a big brand name in the fast food industry with thousands of franchise restaurants globally. Not only does advertising benefits businesses but also creates several job opportunities for employees and it has become a new career trend in recent years.
In contrast, the misuse of advertising or false advertising can make customers feel disagreeable. Advertising is known as one of the key component for every company to success, however, some businesses have overused them to reach the wider customers. For instance, apartment dwellers have to receive a dozen of calls from real estate agents to ask about house sales even though they have no need. Especially, the bait in switch which clothing is the common example makes customers feel upset when receiving products that are completely different from the advertisement.
For the reasons mentioned above, advertising will have beneficial effects on economic and make customer feel happy if it is used appropriately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46992481203 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0018767567 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6662597637 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205921437155 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784691474168 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602716445236 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145555961967 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782508989975 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.