Advertising has become an inevitable part of our lives. Some people believe that it is a positive aspect of our lives while others are of opposite belief. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The importance of advertisement in our life, which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others are reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the both proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive and negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
Analysing the statement and explaining further, the first and the foremost reason behind this is that it can helps to make relationship between public and organizations by with people can easily access about the new products of a firm. Another striking benefit in this regard is that with the help of advertising, the organisational growth become more accurate and stable because advertising is a method that spread information in a formal way to public about products to individuals with more clarityand elaboration. Categorically discussion, it cannot be ignored that the main reason behind this is that if demand increases than supply also inclines. So this method is very crucial to implement the demand of individual. For example, in year 2002, naptol which is India's biggest shopping center, achieved less success. But, in year 2008, with proper utilization of advertising it become no 1 shopping center where crores of people got more data about naptol and its each and every product, which increase its marketing.
Probing ahead, it has numerous demerits. one of the main underlying reasons stems from the fact is that majority of companies misguide to mankinds while advertising. For Instance, Flipkart is also a ankther platform where thousands of people like to do shopping but according to the survey of social Accuracy hundered of masses got wrong quality products which is dustinguish from their exact order. Moving further, it is pertinent to mentioned that some advertisements are meaningless and aren't in the favour of society, which hurts social factors, like advertising tobacco, gutka, paan and beers etc those are injuriousto health. Apart from the reasons Mentioned above it can be clearly stated why some people are against of this trend.
To recapitulate, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of advertisements are indeed too great to ignore. Their are several drawbacks it has that can be easily overweight by some appropriate solutions.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...nt and explaining further, the first and the foremost reason behind this is that ...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
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Message: Consider replacing "in a formal way" with adverb for "formal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ing is a method that spread information in a formal way to public about products to individuals...
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Suggestion: Indias the biggest
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28641975309 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91327054223 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56049382716 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1255202196 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.941176471 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8235294118 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118400103144 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035673923191 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040032957417 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714358753302 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038491344638 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt and explaining further, the first and the foremost reason behind this is that ...
^^
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...emost reason behind this is that it can helps to make relationship between public and...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a formal way" with adverb for "formal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ing is a method that spread information in a formal way to public about products to individuals...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 768, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Indias the biggest'.
Suggestion: Indias the biggest
... example, in year 2002, naptol which is Indias biggest shopping center, achieved less success....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 884, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...th proper utilization of advertising it become no 1 shopping center where crores of pe...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...robing ahead, it has numerous demerits. one of the main underlying reasons stems fr...
^^^
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tising. For Instance, Flipkart is also a ankther platform where thousands of peo...
^
Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...some advertisements are meaningless and arent in the favour of society, which hurts s...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 577, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ocial factors, like advertising tobacco, gutka, paan and beers etc those are inju...
^^
Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: There
...sements are indeed too great to ignore. Their are several drawbacks it has that can b...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28641975309 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91327054223 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56049382716 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1255202196 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.941176471 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8235294118 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118400103144 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035673923191 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040032957417 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714358753302 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038491344638 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.