All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. How far do you agree with this proposal ? how important is it for a child to learn a foreign language ?
It is compulsory to learn speaking a foreign language for all children immediately when they begin their school. Personally, I believe that this concept seems to be somewhat inadequate that I will explain below.
First and foremost, the main obstacle would relate to the cost of learning a foreign language which may be expensive. The reason is often said that not all children have enough money to attend language course or to pay private tutor. A further issue is related to child’s cognitive capacity.This demonstrates that not all kids have the same ability to learn a foreign language and their native language at the same time. This would be better, if children learned to speak their mother’s language before they try to speak second-language. Perhaps, One point against this proposal is the added issue of culture interest, by which children would be more interested in foreign culture than their native culture. If this means children of one nation are obliged now to learn speaking foreign language, this is surely a further significant factor which clearly makes losing successor in culture and language.
Admittedly, I agree with those who argue that learning a foreign language is very essential to improve other skills, since it is very challenging and enhances the brain's abilities. Nevertheless, in my opinion, if this was implemented in improper time, it would make children becoming unfocused on improving one skill. this is because not all children can learn many things at the same time.
In summary, It is logical to conclude that learning foreign language needs to be considered that not all children should learn speaking foreign language immediately, due to the high cost, child’s cognitive capacity, and effect on culture interest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28521126761 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82725868787 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538732394366 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9139692612 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.083333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428476542209 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173333612893 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104135611168 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289969899357 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486785540159 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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