With all the problem in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on the other causes. To what extent do you agree with this view?
In today’s modern world, with the current pace of technological, space exploration has been gaining more and more traction in many regions. However, some people argue that investing in this development only as money and time squandering. From my standpoint, I agree with this statement because while expenditure on research new planets plays a certain part in humankind’s development, it should not take precedence over other domains in our daily life.
On the one hand, I believe that expenditure in space research can be justified because it may be the key to human race’s long-term existence in the future when the Earth is no longer a habitable place. Earth’s natural conditions are increasingly under threat as population growth in each country is increasing every year and the non-stop tempo of socio-economic growth also providing a negative impact on air quality in many nations. Consequently, the Earth’s living conditions will be too harsh for humans, as a result, to raise the citizen’s living standards, the government should invest in a survey and seek for other planets to live in. Because terraforming a new place in a new planet will requires tremendous research, spending money in space exploration as early as possible can save time and also equip humankind with sufficient preparation of knowledge.
On the other hand, I still resist that there are more other urgent areas need a huge financial investment to implement. While space research is an issue that needs to be done in a long-term process, there are still many current alarming issues right now such as education, health or about climate change is getting more serious should also receive meticulous attention until we can find a suitable planet for humans live in. To be more specific, governments should provide more subsidies for education in order to build up a high-quality human resources as well as contribute to the sustainable development of that country in the future, especially for the field of space exploration. Another sphere in need of monetary resources is healthcare as the recent COVID-19 epidemic, healthcare has corroborated that it is the ultimate key of survival for the long-run economic development.
In conclusion, although expenditures on space research are good for cause, the priority should be current problems facing humankind such as healthcare, education. The government should know how to achieve the optimal money distribution between space exploration and other urgent areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 697, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...orming a new place in a new planet will requires tremendous research, spending money in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32997481108 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0123669914 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561712846348 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7769635304 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.769230769 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5384615385 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178450465856 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690810028043 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501846635219 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125391229119 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575543564551 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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