Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
In the recent years, with the development of the internet, our life has many changes. There is a growing number of people who prefer reading news on the internet to reading newspapers. However, some people think that most of important sources of news are in newspaper. I partly agree with this statement.
To begin with, the internet has all of the news which to be related to all the aspects in our life. For example, there are numerous the websites providing the news such as BBC, CNN, New York times and the like. As a result, people can find the any news easily. Moreover, because of the demand of the reader, the news online pages are more developing. Obviously, reading news on the internet is not only cheaper but also more convenient. Many people, especially teenagers enjoy the internet since it is more attractive with the videos and sounds.
On the other hand, although newspapers appeared earlier than internet, it is replaced by the internet. Nowadays, there is a regret truth that very few young people like reading newspaper. The customer of the newspaper are old people mainly. The elder often read the politic, sports and law while the young people enjoy the entertainment news. Besides, the cost of newspapers is quite high. People choose the reading in the internet to save money and time.
In conclusion, both internet and newspaper have equal benefits and contain the important source of news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90041493776 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50079101138 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56846473029 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1427045759 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.4705882353 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1764705882 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464803197345 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13960354778 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771463390339 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274867505972 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265514995568 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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