In this era of competition where pupils are supposed to be performed quite well which puts enormous pressure on them without caring for their physical and mental growth. However, it should be mitigated by increasing the time of sports and exercise. I also support this argument and illustrating my views in the ensuing paragraphs.
To commence with, pushing learners rigorously to study and forced them to achieve top rank in the examination might be killed their innocence which will thirst them to the brink of as drastic as suicide. However, adolescences keen to play games and enjoy the exercise which is a kind of stressbuster activity for them. As quoted that a healthy mind lives in a healthy body and outdoor activities play a vital role to be healthy. For instance, according to a recent survey, students who take part in games and exercises have attended more classes and let us know their extraordinary talent, however, children who always indulge in their studies and use their leisure time in educational work face n number of health and mental problem.
In addition to this, in my perspective, there are some other activities like visit to the museum, historical places, plan for an excursion and propels them to learn things practically. These activities are not only cherished by the students, also render them an opportunity to understand the knowledge closely.
To recapitulate, according to my propensity, involving the student in an extracurricular activities with education enhance their growth comprehensively and confer the chance to enhance their versatility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
...lving the student in an extracurricular activities with education enhance their growth com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, well, for instance, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24705882353 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98414108903 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4852615246 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.8 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108021102459 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476183775632 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518862864884 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612947936127 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411187795816 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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