The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea.
What are the reasons and solutions?
A great number of species are on the verge of extinction owing to environmentally detrimental activities impacting their terrestrial and aquatic habitats. This essay attempts to point out the two common causes of this phenomenon and propose some remedies.
Firstly, today’s world population is increasing unabatedly with the result that a widening amount of forest cover is felled for residential areas and industry. These forests harbor a great proportion of biodiversity and are breeding or feeding grounds for local animals, so it seems inevitable that, as they disappear, a huge number of species are going extinct. Secondly, untreated waste from industrial companies account for most of poor water quality in local areas, which is responsible for the destruction of marine life. For example, small creatures like shrimps or fish are highly vulnerable to even a small amount of polluted water. Consequently, sea mammals, such as whales and seals, feeding on those species are driven to extinction due to shortage of healthy nourishment.
As analyzed, solutions need to center around preserving animal habitats. Therefore, governments should have stringent controls over logging activities and waste disposal from industrial businesses. For instance, the authorities can set higher environmental standards to alleviate negative impacts on animal. Additionally, they have to police these potential sources of pollution to ensure that industrial companies comply with the standards. More importantly, in case companies perpetually violate the standards, they are to be subject to heavy fines. By doing this, establishments have to think twice and in fact, in many tropical countries like Malaysia, these steps have proved to be effective in deterring environmentally inconsiderate companies from destroying the ecosystem.
In short, deforestation and untreated sewage are the prevalent causes of pollution in the world. To stop this, rigorous regulations and hefty fines are of necessity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: A_GREAT_NUMBER_OF_NN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'species'?
Suggestion: species
A great number of species are on the verge of extinction owing to...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tions and hefty fines are of necessity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74410774411 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13593663223 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639730639731 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2046293816 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.733333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110281955896 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353609248944 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057339013031 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550965857219 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367063247872 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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