Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week. Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society?
Increasing dramatically number of mobile phone users are prevalent to persons who use it almost seven days per week, ranging personal and work uses. This trend is concerned as a social problems which diminish communication and relation among human society as a whole. I agree with this belief to what extent as in my opinion, these demerits are overshadowed by its merits.
Throughout the history communication between different places was more difficult than present. It is an undeniable fact that mobile phone plays an important role in connecting people and rising quality of work. For instance, according to the state of emergency when senior citizen has a symptom relating severe disease such as heart disorders and high blood pressure, people who alight on this situation can call to the hospital asking how to first aid. Moreover, as the business about oil production that reporting specific data real-time from oil platform to the main office, helping officers planing negotiation in order to make more profit.
However, some people argue that extraordinarily using phone might effect to family in addition to people keep talking with their friends or colleagues instead of looking after to wife, husband or even children. Furthermore, calling during drive or walk contribute to rising accident rate, as far as government is concerned, the limit of mobile phone use should become visible. Lastly, it is reported that the infrared wave attribute to using phone would be released and take people risk in cancer.
All things considered, there are strong arguments about pros and cons about developed cell phones. Although it makes our life more convenient, regulating in use should be imposed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
...es. This trend is concerned as a social problems which diminish communication and relati...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... that extraordinarily using phone might effect to family in addition to people keep ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27941176471 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70548270706 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709558823529 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9699454314 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235656386239 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696219147923 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493391356806 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121034397528 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450554685341 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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