Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas.
Why is this?
What problems does this cause?
Living in city neighbors is being emphasized by people nowadays, major population show grater enthusiasm to live in urban areas rather than rural as well. This is mainly because there are considerable number of job opportunities as well as better transportation system in cities. Despite many more advantages further to what said before, this issue is followed by some problems also which is going to be extended in detail in this essay.
Variety of job positions and higher minimum wages are like reinforced reasons to push a big population every day start living in big cities, the more number of habitants is exceeding the more traffic and relevant pollutions will be emerged.
Further more, gathering different types of back grounds and customs also habits in a place will end up in cultural inconsistency and disorders which could be a basis for extra irregularities come into surface in society and has to be treated by related specialists in order to maintain proper solutions to this issue.
How ever having a fast approach and accomplishment to any modern criteria and equipment is a right for every individual in current years and we have to put it into consideration that normally this aggregation happens in urban area and enlarged cities.
In conclusion, to live in developed and modern urban neighbors is a globally preferred tendency in spite of many difficulties people face with, they insist on it and there fore the majority of governors and related researchers and developers should prioritize the encountered disorders and plan practical solutions for them to improve the quality of life in such areas in different aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12639405204 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91355439542 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.5141078836 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 197.0 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4285714286 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26618602836 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115096199671 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543717663571 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128200583655 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787324838664 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.0946893788 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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