The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this contemporary era, people are known to have increased life expectancy as well as considered to have better health status, in comparison with those who lived few centuries ago. However, people in the future may not have better health, whereas they might have very poor standard of health compared to the present. I am convinced that, people in the future will have lesser standard of health than now. This essay intends to discuss the possible reasons for such situation with examples to demonstrate the points.
First of all, the present generation has the luxury to live their life disease free, still this developed health status may not be passed on to the future. There are multitude of reasons for this particular situation. First of which would be the sophisticated life style, which makes more and more people extremely lazy and dependent on the technology. Smartphones made our life so convenient, on the contrary paved way for the sedentry lifestyle. At present, people rather choose to spend time on social media and gaming platforms than participating in any form of physical activities.Thus,if this trend continues, people will start gaining weight, which will lead to further health complications in future.
On the other hand, when people started to move to the cities in search of better job, they had very minimal time to cook and clean, that led to the fastfood culture. These foods are infamous for its high sodium and fat content. Fastfood and sedentary lifestyle are the two worst side effects of our modern lifestyle. When these two were combined, it can make any healthy person into a unhealthy one. With more and more people starting to following this trend, it will be detrimental for one's healthy life.
In conclusion, reasons for our present healthy lifestyle must be attributed to the advancements in the fields of science, as well as availability and accesibility of primary healthcare. Eventhough, people will have better access to healthcare facilities in future, it will be wise if people concentrate on improving their diet and daily activities, than investing money on better health services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14326647564 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7619428261 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567335243553 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1179133767 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.1875 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206245301356 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734213396683 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481497229408 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127879050627 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043113426116 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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