The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are some perceptions that today the healthy condition of individuals is better that it may become worse in the coming years. However, I partly agree with this statement and the following paragraphs discuss the reasons why people's well-being might increase and decline to certain levels.
On the one hand, it is predictable that fitness standards will be improved as the living conditions of citizens are getting more and more comfortable. Firstly, thanks to their more lucrative income, they might invest more in building their balanced diet. In fact, they will have a better choice of food selections with high quality to reduce meat intake and increase organic fruits and vegetables in their daily diet, which will help them to become more robust and stay in shape. Secondly, adults might spend much time taking regular exercise that may lead to their physical and mental development. For example, my 35-year-old sister Britney plans next year she is going to join a fitness centre and take up doing yoga, working out and going swimming as she is more conscious of the value of these activities when they can bring them a range of benefits such as strengthening her bones and sharpening her focus.
On the other hand, people are facing potential risks in their surrounding environment that may affect their strength standards. To begin with, pollution is one of the threatening issues causing the human's looming energy crisis. For example, in 2019, Hanoi, Vietnam was one of the most air-polluted cities in the world and plenty of citizens had to suffer from diseases related to their respiratory systems such as tuberculosis or lung cancer. Furthermore, the development of technology has brought about side effects that damage people's well-being. As working officers have to work in front of a laptop for many hours, they have problems with their backache, headache and eye vision, which may become more serious in the coming decades.
To sum up, in my opinion, it is obvious that human well-being has improved in some ways, including a better diet and more regular exercise, but it is also getting worse as a result of issues stemming from air pollution and modern technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0773480663 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61508702302 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593922651934 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3994575913 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.384615385 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6153846154 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0909866105517 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335846848389 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396394379873 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656872961997 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329455339889 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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