The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is believed that human wellbeing in the coming years tends to become worse than it is at present. From my point of view, I agree with this statement and the following paragraphs discuss factors stemming from the living environment and people's habits which are affecting their health in the long term.
On the one hand, extrinsic impacts caused by the surrounding condition have been influencing individuals' health comfort significantly now and even more remarkably in a decade. Firstly, the polluted environment is one of the main reasons for damaging human health comfort. For instance, according to a recent article on Vietnam Net online newspaper, Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam suffered severe air pollution in 2019 and as a result, plenty of local citizens had problems with serious symptoms related to respiratory systems such as lung cancer. Secondly, there have been a range of new diseases that have lead to the decline of adults and children's wellbeing. Covid-2019 can be a good example of this since it has caused more than three million deaths all over the world. It is predicted by scientists that in the future, mankind may have to face an increasing number of health crises like the Corona pandemic.
On the other hand, the human health standard is dropping due to its detrimental living routines. First of all, it can not be denied that the overuse of technological devices such as laptops, smartphones, and televisions has led to various problems. In fact, more and more working officers are experiencing backache, headache and blurry vision because they spend more than ten hours on a daily basis working with a laptop or watching videos on a mobile phone. Furthermore, people seem to lead a busy life with an imbalanced diet, which is occupied by junk food. Due to the ubiquity of fast-food restaurants, teenagers have the tendency of eating sandwiches, burgers or pizzas instead of absorbing organic and nutritious food such as fruits and vegetables. This has become a fashionable trend among the young generation and it might become more popular in the coming time.
In conclusion, in my opinion, individuals' health conditions may get more threatening because of both factors deriving from both the living environment and people's lifestyles.
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- The average standard of people s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 89
- The average standard of people s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 90
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- The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel s customer service The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010 47
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14016172507 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79993585725 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595687331536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2460730203 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.133333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7333333333 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4666666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154605701553 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475677010313 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038558766603 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933314473217 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349783224582 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.