The best way to deal with the rising problem of traffic and transportation is by encouraging people to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Traffic jams have become increasingly acute problem for certain geographical areas. Some people claim that the most effective method to combat the problem is to encourage individuals to move to cities from suburbs and countryside. This essay will argue reasons as to why urbanization is not the best way to go about, even though there are some benefits to it.
Settling down in cities of residents of countryside will significantly decrease the number of personal transport on the roads. That is because people who had to commute big distances in order to get to their workplaces will no more longer have to do that. Living in a big city gives the opportunity to find a job of interest nearby person’s home. This makes taking a short walk to work rather than using transport possible, which leads to smaller number of drivers on highways. This instance have bolstered existing opinion that moving to cities will solve the problem of transportation and traffic.
Despite possible benefits associated with urbanization, the idea that this is the best way to solve challenges related to traffic is completely preposterous. Resettlement of people could lead to increased amount of citizens, which, in turn, anyway will increase traffic on the roads. In addition, number of people who do not own personal transport might grow and the government will have to take care of this as well. Overall, the idea that mass reallocation to urban areas will solve transportation and traffic problems is ill-informed and could potentially lead to a far worse outcome.
This essay argued that urbanization is not the best way to solve the problem. In my opinion, significant drawbacks of mass moving from rural to urban areas does not allow this method to be called the best.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'longer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: longer
...rder to get to their workplaces will no more longer have to do that. Living in a big city ...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... In my opinion, significant drawbacks of mass moving from rural to urban areas do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, so, well, as to, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06506849315 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8662133101 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6415113504 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.642857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30114239022 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102048171036 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508249435031 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175627980503 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198165024927 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.