Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause problems. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a wide range of points of view on the subject of whether it is dangerous when people over the age of 60 work. While some still hold conventional view that individuals older than 60 can still benefit to the society and employers, it is my own conviction that it can cause lots of problems and I am against elderly people at workplaces.
In some countries, people are required by the law to retire and there many reasons for that. The first and the most important are health problems connected to the age. In course of time, individual's speed of neurons becomes slower, which leads to problems such as bad eyesight, distracted attention and different brain related disease, like Alzheimer's disease. This can lead to serious issues related the safety of surrounding people as many details pass through the attention of aging people. For instance, a bus driver in years can just not mention a person walking in the cross walk and seriously harm his health.
Another important point that has to be mentioned is the fact that experienced workers create difficulties for younger ones, which makes finding a job quite tough task. This negative trend can be seen in many spheres of life, however the first one that comes to mind is politics. There was a study that revealed the average age of political workers in post Soviet Union countries and according to it the mean age is equal to 58,7. This not only makes younger generation willing to work in politics unemployed, but also does not allow to flow of fresh ideas and innovative approaches to enter some countries. There are a lot of examples that lend credibility to this argument and one of them is Kazakhstan, where ruling party and its representatives that have not changed over the time have been dominating for over a quarter century.
To sum up, I again reaffirm my position and consider the idea of people to work after the age of 60 a negative one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, while, as to, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72835820896 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59514429112 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588059701493 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.325705671 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20840534215 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748068233153 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754981970875 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14669413803 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718736327457 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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