Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air
tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more
popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way
outweigh the disadvantages?
It is becoming increasingly common for people to go online
to buy what they need rather than going to a shop or
travel agent to do so. Although there are some dangers
and disadvantages to internet shopping. I believe that convenience often outweighs any drawbacks. There are
two main dangers and disadvantages to buying things on
the Internet. The one that attracts the most publicity is the
problem of internet fraud. Unless the website is secure.
hackers may be able to c.opy your credit card details and
steal your money A further disadvantage is that you
cannot examine what you are buying until after you have
bought it This means you may sometimes buy something
that you do not really want On the other hand. shopping
for certain things on the Internet has several points in
its favour. The main one is its convenience. People who
want to compare products and prices can look at all this
information on a website without having to go from shop
to shop. Also. they can make their purchases at any time
of day or night and from any part of the world. The other
advantage is that because internet companies do not need
a shop. the products which they sell are often cheaper All
in all. I think that the advantages of using the Internet for
buying things such as books. computers and air tickets are
greater than the disadvantages. 1-however. someone that
wants to buy c.lothes should visit shops because they need
to see and touch them before buying them. and I would not
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...city is the problem of internet fraud. Unless the website is secure. hackers may be ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hackers
...t fraud. Unless the website is secure. hackers may be able to c.opy your credit card d...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Shopping
...u do not really want On the other hand. shopping for certain things on the Internet has...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: As well
...ithout having to go from shop to shop. Also. they can make their purchases at any t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ithout having to go from shop to shop. Also. they can make their purchases at any t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... having to go from shop to shop. Also. they can make their purchases at any time o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...internet companies do not need a shop. the products which they sell are often chea...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Computers
...ernet for buying things such as books. computers and air tickets are greater than the d...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Someone
...ater than the disadvantages. 1-however. someone that wants to buy c.lothes should visi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... see and touch them before buying them. and I would not
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, may, really, so, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81297709924 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48436929365 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568702290076 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.8936830619 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1764705882 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269008562793 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815475991975 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721862698411 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695218799877 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611995373772 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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