Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Industrial revolutions have been more than centuries and finally the forth revolution, Information Technology, has started in recent years. In fact, this allows us to enjoy more convenient lives such as ordering people’s demands and needs on the internet. Hence, faster and comfortable shopping is being available and popular in many nations, however, some negative aspects arouse from online shopping such as low-quality or scam. This essay will explore advantages and disadvantages of online shopping with evidences.
To start with, not only online shopping may result in disatisfaction, but also it can be used by offenders. First of all, purchasing without confirmation whether quality of goods is acceptable does not guarantee satisfaction. Some low-quality goods are ignorable but if they are quite related to safety, it might result in injuries. Furthermore, anonymousness on the internet might not keep your possessions. What it means is by that most of the purchases are processed by credit card. Thus, scammers deliberately post attractive goods on the shopping web site and steal money using duplicated card.
On the other hand, online purchases bring lots of positive aspects. Having said that the scam and low-quality is arousing problems, regulations for consumer indeed prevent such problems. For instance, use of credits card is guaranteed by card company, which if cards are hacked and faulty used, they compensate back. As well as, items from the internet can be refunded within 7 business days, even if there are no problems. In other words, any items apart from low-quality or just dissatisfaction, is refundable. Therefore, regulations protect consumers from being unsatisfied or financially damaged.
In conclusion, offenders or dissatisfaction would face to anyone, however, laws for consumers are adequately developed. Thus, online shopping is definitely advantageous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
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Line 9, column 259, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...rd is guaranteed by card company, which if cards are hacked and faulty used, they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, first of all, in other words, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67595818815 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14277988425 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655052264808 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4269151716 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135583369484 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395558011039 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523249310469 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825262963105 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928878936988 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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