Children nowadays watch significantly more television than in the past, which reduces their activity levels accordingly.
It is universelly eccepted that number of children who are watching TV are increasing day by day . However it is effecting on their daily life and activities which they were doing.
It is worth considering children are becoming lazy and they are facing with many illneses.From development of technology people are becoming more indolent as children .Our major problem is TV . Watching television is really good you can know about many things by watching some TV programs.However it has more bad sites than good mostly in children life . Many children are addicted to watching television .They are not doing exercise or even they are not studying ,only sitting in front of television. In another word they are being coach potatoes. That TV addicted children are not thinking about their future, only about entertainment.
On the other hand parants have really huge impact on their children life . Parants are really engaged with their every day work for not having some financial problems.Furthermore they don't have a time looking for their children even they are not asking from their children about their study or daily life . An approach which could be taken to motivate young children is to take the time to do fun outdoor activities with then often by the time they have studied a full day ,they are simply too tired go outside playvor do sport .
All in all watching different kind of TV programmes leading to health issues ,however it can be reduced in some years .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, then, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95546558704 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76015701309 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554655870445 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7119808846 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.272727273 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242446793384 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096194118564 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457174115476 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142651098179 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472847738191 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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