Children’s education is expensive. In some countries, the government pay some or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
In recent years, parents pay a lot of money for children to go to school. In some developed countries, the government subsidizes tuition fees for their citizens. In my opinion, I strongly believe that it has more benefits than drawbacks.
On a hand, tuition fees is free which brings a lot of advantages for people. Initially, it can cut down on the rate of illiteracy. It means that the country will have many opportunities to grow quickly because their citizens have much knowledge which helps them become more deep-read. It also helps people raise their consciousness and the nation more civilized which may be attractive with a lot of international tourists. In other words, as long as people get some degrees, they will have a stable job and better life. Not only does the country develop economy but it also reduces the number of criminals which makes the country more peaceful. Besides that, living standard of people is higher and higher and their life is convenient and suitable. For example, parent could use the amount of money which is paid for tuition fees to either travel or repair their house.Last but least, poor children could go to school and have better life in their future. In short, it also makes the percent of poor people decreases which is an important factor for countries to develop more and more and drop remarkably a number of criminals.
On the other hand, the government has to bear the high cost when they must pay all of the tuition fees. It means that instead of updating road, medical system and so on, they must spend much money for education. Because some people are rich enough to pay the tuition fees, the government does not need to pay the cost which spend studying for all classes. Besides that, it also makes salary of teachers difficultly increase although they may have to teach more classes.
In conclusion, the coin has two sides. In my view, the government should subsidize tuition fees for their all citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in short, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79646017699 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48980832595 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501474926254 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2886930386 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119388737116 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440427367617 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631314456549 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987838279168 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515969620169 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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