children taking their own decision
Some people think that granting children to take their own decisions in day to day matters will result in a society of individuals who will be selfish. However, there are people who supports that making their own choices which affect them is necessary.
Children often wanted choose their own things because had it been their decision, they would not be regretting about that thing in the future.They will be having their own world and will be inspired by the superheros they watch in the movies.In such case they would be arguing with their parents about the toys which they are asking for.
Some parents will allow them to be as their wish whether it may be academics or entertainment.Others restrict them in doing so.No matter whatever they are doing they will not be encouraged.Parents will no allow them as as they take care of their children.It is quite a bit hard for them to do such things but they do not have
any other option.Instead of that they should tell them the reason and the consequences the child has to face for their own decision in a polite manner.They should be told in way that how it affects the society if they are selfish about themselves.Being selfish does not make one's life a better one .
To conclude this I can say that not every child should be encouraged for their things which can make them bad.However they should not be discouraged for everything. Parents should be in such a manner that they should be mature enough to stop them from taking
wrong decisions and allowing them to take right decisions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76666666667 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73069711689 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507407407407 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.196475146 49.4020404114 369% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.5 106.682146367 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.0 20.7667163134 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281125460349 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181682627981 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884970649228 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189639437714 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10688141793 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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