children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world.
What are your opinions on this?
Nowadays many child play the brutal games. A game wich showing gross violence scene. Children is not prefare to watch a brutal scene, while they was growing period parent have to watch them. Including about to choose a proper game for kids.
News to day says that the number of violence and crime are inceras in most majority country in the world. They believe the main cause is come from brutal game. Children has played violence game potentialy to try the same scene for their friend. There is very dangerous when they try to imitate the brutal movement from a game. It can hit their frind.
Parents should have some methods to control their child, including to give them understanding about violent games. They have been explaining to their kids, that a brutal scene in a games is to imitated in daily activity. If children do not find their parents suggestion, it means kids have restricted for plaing kind of the most violent games, or prents should prohibit their child to playing game.
In my views, violence and crime is happen when kids have not a good understanding from their neighborhood. And kids who in growing period have big curiosity. this is potentially to trigger hardshness case increase sharply.
The here conclusion is, parents should to maintance their children and give them great understanding for not to copy a brutal scene on games.
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...There is very dangerous when they try to imitate the brutal movement from a game....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86266094421 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45161695311 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545064377682 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.099680485 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8125 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207285692475 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737308107009 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581285562418 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115263279498 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513736456184 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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