Companies and private invididuals, not government should pay to clean up the pollution that they produced
It is sometimes believed that organizations and the citizens should pay money for the workers who clean the pollutants that the waste to the environment instead of the government. This essay strongly agree with this suggestion as now will be discussed.
The first argument behind my belief is that this can help the authorities to save the national budget. This is because nowadays , the development of the industry increase rapidly. Therefore, the amount of chemical waste which produce to environment is more and more. So if the organizations pay for it, this can help the government save a lot of money.
Another point worth mentioning is that this can help the factories and private individuals to be more responsible with their pollutants . This is because if the waste more garbage to the environment, which means they have to pay more money.
In conclusion, I totally agree that the industrial companies and factories should be all responsible for the money which is used to pay to clean up the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01183431953 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92883806389 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0708364295 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1111111111 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21008014524 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791729782729 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745964565267 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132845539707 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551406235464 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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