Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technological advancements have made people’s lives less boring because of digital games. In fact, I believe that e-games contribute to children’s creativity whereas they also harm children in two ways.
Thanks to globalisation, almost all people nowadays have access to computers and are familiar with computer games, which normally require one to think out of box. To put it into other way, electronic games can be played till the final stage with a help of logical thinking. For example, puzzles and GTA versions trigger children’s thinking abilities to level up since they are programmed...
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