Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the modern era of information and technology, the invention of computers is believed to be a vital factor in changing the world. I am firmly convinced by this idea as they provide the most significant contributions and improve living standards of human beings.
The invention of the internet has brought life-changing effects to the world. To be more specific, the internet provides users with social networking sites such as Facebook, Twitter and currently, TikTok, which help them widen their relationship network and update the latest news depending on their hobby. Moreover, people receive more opportunities to learn new skills through websites such as Coursera or edX, and more chances to find appropriate jobs through recruitment websites such as Linkedln. Finally, people can easily meet their daily entertainment needs as the internet is an ideal large source where they can watch movies or play games. It can be seen that the computer has brought significant convenience advancing the living standards of many people.
The second opinion I would like to mention is that the creation of artificial intelligence (AI) notably supports scientists and companies in various areas. For example, currently, robots are able to serve as waiters, dentists or factory workers with ten folded productivity than humans. In the future, robots programmed by AI are expected to alter humans to deal with dangerous jobs such as firefighter or ocean explorer, which can reduce the life risk for human. However, the overuse of AI may worsen unemployability as millions of people are altered by robots who can create more productivity than them without paying salary and taking rest.
In conclusion, it is reasonable to say the computer is one of the greatest inventions in the history of mankind, and we need to make use of this innovation wisely in order to make our lives better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19078947368 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87745288594 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611842105263 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9579640233 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.088005871855 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335318319713 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027799218208 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600986754121 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023593599486 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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