Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, it is believed by some that computers are cited as the most essential innovation of the hundreds years ago. Although this idea are reasonable to some extent, I would argue that there are several inventions which are the same important.
On the one hands, human beings developments reap rewards from creation of computers. Firstly, it acted as a key sources for information technology which later had an influence on the development of software and hardware. This leads to social network budgets in which people can connect to the Internets, store and analysis informations effectively more than whenever before. Secondly, computers made a huge impacts on other industries. Technology and Science, for instance, discovered artifical intelligences such as robots and drones or space travels rely on computers.
On the other hands, I am convinced that the discovery of an electric bulb played a similar role. The first reason is that most of devices have to operate by electronic, even computers. Admitedlly, electronic made business and work easier and more effective. Additionally, creating transport was a breakthrough in the human life. As a result, people can not only save an enomous time to move and trade goods but also international connection be established.
In conclusion, although there may be some reasons support computers becoming the most vital invention for hundreds years, I belived that electronic and transport innovations are the same important roles. If we continue develop potential budgets, there will be more essential things arrived and help people life become more convenient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 407, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'impact'?
Suggestion: impact
...before. Secondly, computers made a huge impacts on other industries. Technology and Sci...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the devices') or simply say ''most devices''.
Suggestion: most of the devices; most devices
... similar role. The first reason is that most of devices have to operate by electronic, even com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39130434783 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97340931617 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648221343874 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2931711208 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156489153763 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486185010713 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520126242845 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100705281778 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541318868827 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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