Consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What can be done to protect?
Consumers are bombarded with proliferation of advertisements. Advertisements in televisions, on moblie phones and in everywhere on streets. In fact, advertisement brings many benifits to companies and consumers. However, it still exists disadvantages that consumers can not control. I totally agree this statement affects heavily to consumers in both positive side and negative side. It must be delivered with immediate actions in order to deter us from possible risks.
On the one hand, advertising shortens the distance between companies and consumers. We can purchase everything with our delight with only a phone or a computer. Advertisements give us many choices with comparisions about price, quality and appearance. Lastly, we will choose one we prefer mostly. Moreover, the companies increase sales by supplying their products to customers easily. That promotes the economic of a country.
On the other hand, advertising manipulates people strongly. When firms invite celebrities to become their brand ambassadors, the seduction commercials draw on customers that buying a product will make them happier. The consumers have a psychology match with their idols. It makes us afford unnecessary purchases in wasting.
In my view, there are two solutions we should take simultaneously to tackle this situation. First of all, the Goverment should regulate advertisments by rules. For examle, Governments should censor false information or products that are harmful. Secondly, the consumers should be smart enough to purchase effectively.
Conclusion, advertisements are an important part of global commerce. But don't let advertisments trick ourself because this a great way to attract consumers among competing companies. We should equip knowledge to avoid potential harms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... important part of global commerce. But dont let advertisments trick ourself because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, in fact, first of all, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80228136882 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22090265018 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665399239544 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2180547876 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.347826087 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4347826087 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.39130434783 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254127349157 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664871773321 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528226514889 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133627120583 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555394796446 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.39 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.18 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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