consuming cigarette is forbidden in public areas. you disagree or agree with this statement.
Most of people in different countries are forbidden to smoke in public sites. This essay completely agrees with that extras because smoke is a main disease of breathing such as cancer and asthma, and most of visitors who spending their holiday in public areas are dominant with children and can be impact in their health.
The influence of consuming cigarette gives impact to respiratory disorders including bronchitis asthma and pneumonia necreases. Majority of breathing problem caused by cigarette which consist of nicotine and colonial which the gases inhaled by society. it can more dangerous to the respiratory system because breathing is sensitive for human organs. As the results, all of breathing problems can trigger organized damage and decrease the function of the health and blood vessels. For Example, according to the Ministry of Health, 15 percent of asthma is effected by exposure of smoke cigarette is virus from smoking it self.
Another reason, the impact of smoking in public areas is the children's health. Most of public places is usual for holiday destinations. Public areas such as 200, museum, and other excursion dominated with children, then the manager of their place must prohibit the smoke to protect the health of children. For instance, France as International heritage of tourism in this world had inhibit the visitors in order to smoke in Paris, such as Eiffel Tower, Louvre Museum, and Palace of Versailles.
Finally, the conclusion of this essay. I agree with the notion for banning smoke in public city. Therefore, the government must prohibit it. because consuming tobacco should be dangerous due to the impact to lung disease and it is hazardous for children
- The bar graph shows the number of car journeys into the city per day from 1996 to 2005 89
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in hydroelectric power station 73
- The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree. 61
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent don you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- The bar graph shows the number of car journeys into the city per day from 1996 to 2005 46
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
Most of people in different countries are forbidden to...
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Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the visitors') or simply say ''most visitors''.
Suggestion: most of the visitors; most visitors
...reathing such as cancer and asthma, and most of visitors who spending their holiday in public ar...
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Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ial which the gases inhaled by society. it can more dangerous to the respiratory s...
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Line 2, column 616, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...f smoke cigarette is virus from smoking it self. Another reason, the impact of smokin...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'inhibited'.
Suggestion: inhibited
...l heritage of tourism in this world had inhibit the visitors in order to smoke in Paris...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'inhibited'.
Suggestion: inhibited
...l heritage of tourism in this world had inhibit the visitors in order to smoke in Paris...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20802919708 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63988725931 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532846715328 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8283082316 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187097617618 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660635229013 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540930537825 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126255971557 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04809641926 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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