Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In the fast-paced world of today, international brands are spread in many nations as well as various local product export in another countries so that people can purchase the same product from any corner of the world. The merits of this situation definitely outweigh the demerits. In the following paragraph, I shall put some arguments to support my views.
There are also many advantages associates with this phenomenon. to begin with, nowadays, people use branded product in their day to day life, so people do not try more effort to purchase internation product because all brand store is available in some range of their houses. Secondly, when people are able to buy their demand products from various countries, it leads to uplifting the economy for countries, because producer could export their products to every nook and cranny of the world, thereby increasing the amount of the sale by leaps and bound. Consequently, the possibility of buying from different countries is a step up the economic ladder.
However, on the flip side, some negative points behind this phenomenon. Some multination industries produce comfortable products like puma, Nike so people aim to buy this product at any price, this same product manufacture in their own country but people do not purchase it. Therefore, people buy goods from different nations. As a result, the country must increase import than export so this situation is effected in the economy.
To recapitulate, it is an indisputable fact that globalization has revolutionized the whole world, and I believe that there are both advantages and disadvantages. I hope that such development should be continued in order to make the globe a better place for human beings mankind.
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...make the globe a better place for human beings mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19642857143 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8466750207 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596428571429 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2132392452 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31145476183 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895998082217 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660651297229 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166463042488 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810333248737 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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