With globalization and latest technology released, people can purchase the same products on the internet or in international markets so the difference between nations is minimal than before. I firmly believe that the drawbacks outweigh the advantages.
On the one hand, thanks to the advances in technology, people can order oversea product online without difficulties. For example, people in Taiwan can purchase fish from Japan on the website, and the fresh seafood will deliver to their doors in few days. Besides, it is convenient for international business to sell their cargo all over the world. To be specific, fishermen can not only sell their seafood to the local fish markets, delivering oversea as a commercial operation is a trend too. These commercial models can build the relationship between countries, and the governments will also interact intensely.
However, the distinction between countries will become hard to recognize than before on the basis that the local products are possible to be stop selling. Moreover, if every countries in the world sell the similar products, it will have some detrimental problems like less variety of local shops. For instance, people are able to buy things anywhere now so that the fashion will dominate what kind of products should be produced. In order to meet customers' expectation, companies are prone to produce the most popular type of products. Therefore, local products may suffer from failing customers' imagination, which in turn attract fewer consumers to purchase.
In conclusion, although the benefits of less distinction between nations are obvious, it is clear to me that the drawbacks are significant than the benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...ts should be produced. In order to meet customers expectation, companies are prone to pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37593984962 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87776491307 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1463428761 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129397343946 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419709040623 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442687989721 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655490438604 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543796032684 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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