In countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Obviously, the phenomenon of obesity and its corresponding impacts have sparked massive debates. In this regard, apart from numerous fitness issues which overweight people are struggling whit, obesity is the main risk factor of a remarkable number of diseases. In my view, different elements contribute to increase body mass including the lack of physical activity and consuming fast-foods.
Of course, in today’s modern life, individuals due to their busy timetables spend less time on routine exercises. Therefore, the absence of physical activities in daily routines of people, particularly in developed countries, can lead to being overweight. Likewise, living in urban areas and the advent of sophisticated tools such as remote controls and mobile phones make people far lazier. Consequently, the inactivity ends up increasing the average weight amongst all age groups from teenagers to elderly humans.
In addition, we shouldn’t lose sight of the roles of unhealthy diet. Generally speaking, eating high-calorie fast-foods which is spreading in the four corners of the globe paves the way to fatness. Recently, scientists have conducted a remarkable number of surveys on the effects of fast-food consumption and find out a significant relationship between this variable and obesity. As a tangible example, a man needs approximately 2500 calories during a day. By consumption of nutritionally poor fast-prepared meals, like hotdog, he obtains extra calories. Hence, these surplus calories in his body convert into fat cells.
On the other hand, there are many easily applicable solutions which are suggested by researchers to prevent obesity. For instance, having healthy diets, changing the lifestyle, and, being more active physically. Undoubtedly, a simplest way to making the body fit is regular walking for around 30 minutes at least three times a week. Another formula to evaporate extra fat cells and to improve body shape is to turn into vegetables and the decrease of carbohydrate consumption.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments on the causes of obesity and which policies have to take into account, the main elements are inactive lifestyle and eating nutritionally bankrupt foods. At the end, it is up to you: do some exercises or endure a surgery to make your stomach smaller!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, likewise, so, therefore, apart from, at least, for instance, in addition, of course, such as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46778711485 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01534598917 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675070028011 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9984519771 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.736842105 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63157894737 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0914073807919 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226865069713 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222629768554 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464676379605 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232021116792 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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