Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However at best, these methods are ineffective and at worst, they may be dangerous. To what extent you agree?
Irrefutably, it is a fact that if health is gone, everything is gone. Nowdays, more and more people adopt unconventional medicines. Nevertheless, there are plethora of masses who believe that these drugs are useless and have detrimental effects. I do not agree with this view and this essay would shed light on the valid standpoints of this view in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, unorthodox medicine plays part and parcel role in human being's life. It is beneficial for them because it has no side effects. Although, if it is fail to deliver immediate results, yet it provides long lasting relief from many digestion and respiration problems. For example, natural drugs such as Ayurveda and Homeopathy are always used to cure serious diseases. It is not only profitable to reduce the diseases, but also it makes the body fit as fiddle. Owing to this reason, it would be fair to say that complementary medicines are effective as compared to other medicines.
Moving further, alternative therapies sometimes very useful in dangerous diseases such as cancer and tuberculosis. Patients having these types of problems are mostly cured by artificial insemination. Apart from this, these forms of nostrums are less invasive and cheaper as compared to the modern medicines. For illustration, according to some health practitioners, it is manifested that 90% of the health issues are sort out with the help of unconventional medication. Although, there is no much research is conducted in the field of these therapeutics, yet it is suitable method for folks to treat with the disease. It is not only helpful for adults,but also for the kids. So, faith healing is a best approach to tackle the health illness.
In compendium,I believe that faith healing is very effective for mortals. It is not harmful because it had no side effects and also it is less invasive and cheaper as compared to allopathic drugs.
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...nd also it is less invasive and cheaper as compared to allopathic drugs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, apart from, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07301587302 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94504293751 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574603174603 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8343802073 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1052631579 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932333912529 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259074097434 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290923625979 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0471138648377 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364132124067 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.