Currently, there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at the best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
There is now a tendency towards the usage of alternative kinds of therapy. However, these approaches are ineffectual at their best and potentially hazardous at worst. I completely agree with the statement that alternative medicine can be advantageous in many situations, however, some methods may not work for everyone. While different techniques could be less expensive than traditional medicine, I believe these types of treatment are not based on any scientific evidence to prove that the medication is highly effective.
In my point of view, substitute varieties could be cheaper than the western methods that most people are used to. In addition, the western practice of medicine would require high tech robotics and machinery such as an X-ray image or a CT scan to observe things more deeply. However, in another perspective of treatment; herbs, oils, therapeutic touch and massages have been seen to be more effective not only to relieve your body health, as well mental and emotional health. It would be a natural and healthy approach to treating. For example, research shows that about 30% of the people who received traditional medicine were more satisfied than the ones who spent a lot of wealth to treat a small condition. Medicine would be available to everyone in the community and not be limited to wealthy people, ensuring a healthier and more viable society in a country.
As far as I am concerned, most long-established varieties have problems with scientific evidence. Furthermore, many scientists are still more sceptical about the reliability and validity of the effects of the medicines tried, and whether they have the same effects on everyone. It is not 100% proven to solve everyone's issues. For instance, my aunt was diagnosed with arthritis 5 years back. With everyone saying that oils and therapy could provide a cure, she continued for 2 years, unfortunately, the results were not seen and her health deteriorated more which was not the case with my mom who was cured completely. Different people have different body structures and the way their body responds is different, which could lead to more extreme health problems such as fractures, strokes etc. Therefore, users should be under the regulation and should be approved by the local authorities to continue further on
In conclusion, these conservative methods of medicine allow people to take a step back from what's usual and create new theories which could sometimes be advantageous, like in the case of being inexpensive and making it available to anyone regardless of their position. Although, scientific proof from health professionals are needed to prevent further damage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2244.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90781305985 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8185442112 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197083095798 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590209854689 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645976628976 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129276991448 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880761376623 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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