The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider; the rich are becoming richer, and the poor are getting even poorer. What problems can the situation cause? What can be done to reduce this gap?
All across globe, categorization of which nations are rich and poor is common among many people with the richer countries being more demanding than the poorer ones. As the rich grow richer, the poverty within certain countries begin to grown, with the distance between these nation become significantly more seen. While the main issue contributing is the distribution of global wealth being unequal and less acquainted towards poverty reaching nations, I believe a viable solution would be to allow the wealth to be equally distributed among the countries regardless of them being rich or poor.
Migration has become a more demanding sector contributing towards the global economy of all nations. Additionally, people leave poor countries to be educated in more developed counties and work for jobs with high paying salaries, lading to a better lifestyle within those countries. For example, the richest 1% on half of the world’s income while poorer people cannot even afford health care systems with the migration of people from less developed countries under their government regulations. This will eventually cause a brain drain within the poverty leading countries where populations of people would die with them not being able to afford their daily needs.
A viable solution towards the countries being treated fairly and equally is to equally categorize the wealth among all countries regardless of their populations. Furthermore, developed countries should be encouraged by higher societies to financially support the poor nations in terms of road infrastructure, health care, global hunger, as well as educations for the future generation. For example, proper wage policies and other event policies could be developed, so that the income would be used accordingly without any wasting. As a result, all the nations would work together to aid themselves through difficult times where poverty is just a small issue a globe can eradicate!
In conclusion, scarcity and hardships within countries are always common and they all have reason to occur. The issue of carefully organizing the wealth among counties could be easily alleviated with successful companionship among countries and proper policies and regulations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this nation' or 'these nations'?
Suggestion: this nation; these nations
...gin to grown, with the distance between these nation become significantly more seen. While t...
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Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es and proper policies and regulations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47965116279 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81056247486 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6429736847 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.083333333 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150055437348 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621947840496 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423849722783 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919005785566 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667566385682 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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