Demand for food is increasing worldwide.What is the cause of this?What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?
The requirement of food items in burgeoning globally because of various reasons. Reasons such as increase in population, the wastage of food and people buying rations in a large scale are to be blamed for the spike in food demand at the international level. There are several guides that can be followed by the international community to get requirement of food balanced.
First and foremost, The pioneering cause of this problematic situation is the drastic change in the figure od the total population of the world. For example, in the past decade, the poplulation as of the whole world has increased by 110%, which is immensely shocking and has never been seen in the past. These numbers can be controlled by introducing different theories to the public such as one child policy. Whose aim was to control the population in China. this issue need to be taken care of.
Secondly, The rough usage of eatables and the people buying food in stacks are the second most problem causing factors. These issues usually happen when people with big bank balance do not think while purchasing food items and often do not know the value of food. For instance, People in the UK have a box outside their houses in which they deposit their unuseable items and leftover food. They should consider giving their leftovers to needy people who are affected by poverty. And this solution would lead to the resolvement of this global issue.
To conclude, The demand of food is on rise because the supply of food is under the requirement of people and I think we should certain steps to resolve this universal problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82545454545 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55598859269 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7765909663 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274177252868 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862986473359 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663303152475 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170132240745 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678221043876 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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