Despite the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world stop go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
Agriculture has experienced a progressive development in recent days, despite this, feeding has become a problem for many people across the globe. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this problem and provide possible solution.
Many people around the globe has nothing to feed on because they could not afford the produce that are made available for consumption as the price of this income exceeds the average income of a local man. For instance, in Nigeria, the income of an average Nigerian is #18,000 and a bag of rice which is the most common food item consume in the country is #23,000. This makes it difficult for an average Nigerian to buy a bag of rice for consumption. Also, many agricultural produce factories are situated in urban settlement and this makes it difficult for people especially farmers in rural area to access the factory so as to make their produce readily available for consumption.
However, to solve the problem of hunger globally, government should increase the income of an average household so as to enable households to afford food items. For instance, Nigerian government proposed to increase the minimum wages of an average Nigerian from #18000 to #35000. This, when implemented will enable more households to have food to feed on. Furthermore, agricultural producing factories should be decentralized to the rural area so as to allow farmers to have easy accessibility to the factories. For instance, In the UK, in 2005, production factory of cereals were decentralized to rural settlement as a result of high demand of cereal, this later improve supply and the supply outweighed the demand.
In summary, although there has been several improvement in the agricultural s ector, several measures should be put in place to allow people around the globe to be able to feed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun improvement seems to be countable; consider using: 'several improvements'.
Suggestion: several improvements
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, as to, for instance, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09698996656 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82371315872 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498327759197 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5600287159 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201853047729 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848483764451 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677706803256 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147742035222 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753383729537 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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