The increment in crime incidents is becoming now, one of the serious concern of the society and the authorities are doing their utmost best to reduce such incidents. But, inspite of doing all such steps, crime reduction is the thing yet to be seen. I also agree with the above-mentioned statement, and will share my views on it.
The authorities have taken certain steps to minimise the crime incidents. The police authorities have made efforts to attain people's faith by improvising their search criteria. Installation of CCTV surveillance in public places such as bus stands, railway stations, airports, malls and many more, made their search operations easier and local theives in fear of getting caught by such surveillances. Regular supervision by police officers made people more assured. Judicial authorities have started giving strict punishments to serious offenses, to maintain fear of the law and order in criminals' mind. All these steps have been taken so that maximum number of crime incidents can be finished off.
But, now the question arises that, whether all these steps are fruitful or, have we seen such changes till now? All these steps worth appreciation but the situation is still the same till date. These can stop or prevent some incidents, but it doesn't help to finish the root-cause of committing crime. The topmost factor, which forces people to commit crime, is poverty. A research conducted by UN indicates that more than 70% of crime incidents are committed by such persons, who can not afford two times' meal, in order to get some money. Unemployment is the next biggest factor which forces people to commit crime. Misbelief and, in some countries, pride and honour can be possible reasons as well.
Although, the authorities already took certain steps to overcome crime, in my opinion, they should focus more to vanish the root causes of crime, in order to eradicate the crime not only from the civilised socities, but also from the whole world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... stop or prevent some incidents, but it doesnt help to finish the root-cause of commit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, well, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07339449541 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60765729221 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590214067278 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.009302572 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5882352941 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194448835184 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062829123255 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564694963795 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138311024606 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651312618736 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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