Should ordinary man be given the license to keep a revolver and gun?
It is evident that the numbers of crime incidents have increased multifold in recent years. In order to protect oneself from such incidents, an ordinary person can think of getting a license to keep arms like revolver, gun etcetera. I totally disagree with the above mentioned idea, describing the reasons in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, having an arms license, allows an individual, the total freedom to use in the times of danger. However, if governments will take this step, it will lead to a locality of people loaded with ammunition. Different people have different kinds of intellectual. Some might will use it in the case of a little dispute, some will use it to take personal or professional revenges. Such steps will result in the overall degradation of society’s ethical and moral values.
Additionally, governments have appointed specific personnel like police department, crime cell, national level security forces and so on, to deal with neighbour or pick-pocketing events. Moreover, the arms and ammunition is not a piece of cake, which anyone can get. Several aspects are checked including the mental status, the risk factor of one’s life from potential enemies and other important points before appointing an arms license.
In conclusion, equipping everyone with revolver and gun would be an extreme condition. Instead of that, everyone should teach about the ways to self defence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32300884956 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8784639757 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66814159292 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2661942083 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5384615385 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100477681371 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326307725588 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657581264857 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745052519954 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760717716715 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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