In developing countries, people have less access to education. Some people say that the problem can be solved by providing schools and teachers. Others say that computers and internet should be provided . discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In this fast-paced world, many growing nations has been suffering from limited accessibility of education. Although, it is believed by few individuals that building Schools and appointing teachers con resolve this problem, other are of the opinion that Provision of computers and internet might be tackled this Issue. However, I stand with with former view as provide personalised support as well as foster Social Skills.
On the one hand, there are two prominent reason Why Some people consider tradition education method to be Superior. Firstly, it provides personalized attention from the educator. In other word, pupils who found difficulty in any specific subject, instructor will help them through not only repeating Content but also providing some task. Additionally,even if they are busy with some work, they provide personal classes to students If necessary. Therefore, which leads to overall acedemic growth of learners.secondly, school is a physical place where students Can Communicate Face-to-Face to their mates which enhance their communication skills. Moreover,it fosters Social Skill which plays crucial role in every students life.
on the other hand, those who suggest that
Supplying digital equipment such as computer and internet connectivity expand individual education because it offers vast amount of educational resources Such as Online classes, digital Library and So on. Even though students are stayed away from the institution, they can learn with the help of digitalisation in education. For example, in modern life every Corporation requied their employeess have least amount of technological Skills in order to increase productivity at work Place. Hence, students of remote places can compete with other Candidate in the race of decent future.
In my opinion, providing computer with internet Connectivity to pupils Can have benefits in Certain situation; However, I deem that formal education provide Personalised feedback, learn communication and foster their social skills. Thus, this will improve the quality of education.
In recapitulation, Despite people are varing in their opinion, I reckon that without Face-to-face learning Students neither get personalised approch nor build their Social Skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, i reckon, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76876876877 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01741586332 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627627627628 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4895490131 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0625 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220905815428 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655351862956 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564493947977 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105917083624 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051347195469 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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