Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this cutting - edge competitive era ,every individual hove dream to live in urban area which leads to paucity of residence which result in social impact on society. It is belived by few individual that anthorities can tackle this issue and paovide remedy. In my opinion, I partially agree with this notion as government as well as every individual can resolve this problem effectively.
First of all,the reason why it is suggested
that government should figure out the problem because authorities has resources, power
and responsibility to intervene and implement policies. In Other words,if government restrict allocation of land and focus on vertical housing which hep in even distribution of shelter. for intance, in many developed countries such as in singapore governmen buit vestical houses in small place . moreover, another reason why leaders overcome problem easily is that, they can apply extra taxes in banglows and laage house. So It is less prachased by peoples. Theorfore, canadian government restrict people to buy house for the two year of Period to
overcome problem.
In contrast, other people can problems help to solve this problems through moving from
cities to suburban and outskirts of towns which provide opportunity to open own business in agriculture such as farming business. Additionally, it also foster individuals health and stress-free life which ultimately reduce the number of health related problems.
In recapitulation, I believe that not only
government but also large masses of
Socity can overcome this problem through applying more taxes on buglows and promoting vertical housing as well as moving to
county-side area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, in contrast, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47104247104 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88540090459 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644787644788 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5915448499 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.083333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24979452609 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835136887551 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645146969658 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095632585465 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711103560093 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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