Technology is regarded by some people as the chief factor that cause various environmental problems, while others think oppositely that developing technology is a good solution. Though we are facing with a series of environmental problems as a result of technology improvement, I believe that technology plays an important role in solving environmental-related issues.
Admittedly, as modern technology develops, living a life full of high-tech products does harm to the ecosystem. If human among the whole world start living a life without technical equipment such as automobiles, air conditioners and refrigerator, there will automatically be no pollution in surrounding area, especially less greenhouse gases emission. Moreover, the depletion of natural resources like fossil fuels would be reduced to a greater extent when people change their lifestyle and have a simple life, which is beneficial to the environment.
On the other hand, I do believe with technology advancement, most of environment problems can be solved. It is due to the immaturity of technology we used in the past that cause harm to the nature. However, nowadays, the continuous development of technology, such as exploitation of sustainable energy sources, recycling exhaust and sewage and improvement of the utilization rate of raw materials, can not only reduce pollutants but also optimize producing processes. Most importantly, only in this way, can we realize sustainable development and provide a clean environment for later generations.
All in all, despite the harm caused by the process of technology improvement, the top priority is to optimize technologies and take full use of them so that we can minimize potential damage to the environment.
- Which one do you prefer Why 1 a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days or2 another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days 60
- A government spends money on all adults after 25 year old on a training course for the most up to date skills at workplace Do you think it is effective Why or why not 73
- TOEFL T P O 49 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Development in technology causes environmental problems Some people believe the solution in these problems is everyone accepts a simpler way of life while others say that technology can solve these problems Discuss both view and give your own opinion 89
- Technology makes life complex, and makes it simple is to stop using technology.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67213114754 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44708921839 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659836065574 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3037686044 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.777777778 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289341687887 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115902412756 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905971123531 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166307887688 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101116095631 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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