Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others propose that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
School discipline is becoming increasingly problematic in the modern age. While some people claim that teachers should be responsible for discipline, others believe that parents are in charge of it. From my perspective, both sides have valid points; however, I would argue that school discipline is the responsibility of families.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that teachers and schools are commonly regarded as important influencers on students' discipline. This is because students' behaviors are under the control of teachers at schools. Furthermore, sometimes parents are too blind to notice the bad aspects of their little kids’ attitudes. In such situations, the weaknesses of children can only be identified and corrected by their teachers. Hence, teachers' assistance in the development of children is inevitable.
On the other hand, it is out of the question that parents play an integral part in regulating righteous attitudes. First of all, the long-lasting relationships and the strong bond between them are essential for the educational and emotional development of their children. As a child's time is mostly spent with their families from an early age, their parents are better engaged in their activities and they can understand their kids’ behavior better. For instance, whenever the children go astray, their parents can redirect them to the right path as soon as possible. Thus, I hold the view that parents have an immense responsibility in tightening their children’s discipline.
In conclusion, both parental love and teachers' technical knowledge and skills can assist with a child's overall development. However, in my opinion, parents’ participation plays the main role in helping a youngster become a disciplined person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51851851852 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10523254134 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596296296296 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.792564953 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269224258403 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914018783387 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785532019408 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184179959388 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131635905313 0.056905535591 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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