Tourism is an ever-growing industry. What benefits and drawbacks do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?
It is undeniable that tourism is a leading industry in every country. In fact, tourism not just benefit a single individual, but a whole community. However, I believe that tourism both has its own advantages and disadvantages to people and society.
The first advantage of tourism is it brings huge economic benefits to the national economy as it yields billions of dollars per year. Not only does it appeal to local residents, but it attracts foreign visitors as well, which is a big source of foreign currency. An additional advantage of this industry is that it raises our living standards to new heights. For example, the jobless have more employment opportunities and the wealthy can have good trips which help them relax and extend their knowledge. Another benefit of tourism is that it is the bridge that connects us with the outer world. If we demand honor, respect, and admiration from foreign countries, it is inevitable to enhance our image through this industry.
The greatest disadvantage of tourism is environmental problems. For example, tourism can often cause environmental damage such as erosion, pollution, and the loss of natural habitats. Even if tourists behave responsibly, they can still cause damage. Another negative aspect of this industry is foreign poaching. Most of the tourism industry in a developing country is owned by big foreign companies. They make the major profits, leaving local businesses with relatively little benefit. Another drawback of tourism is cultural clashes. For instance, tourists often lack respect for local traditions and culture, refuse to follow local dress standards, or behave rudely or inappropriately towards locals.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that tourism is a mixed bag of benefits and drawbacks. While tourism may have some negative aspects, I believe they are outweighed by the more significant positive aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30333333333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86823794147 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593333333333 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4138667618 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7368421053 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248357252555 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854964620619 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659332132854 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159625457232 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351144027096 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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