do you think that parents should be punished if their five-year-old child commits a crime? from what age should children be held responsible for their own behaviors?
There is little doubt that a child’s development is most susceptible to the nurture and education from his or her parents. The issue that attracts more attention and discussion is whether the parents should be liable for any law-offending acts committed by their children. From my perspective, parents should be responsible for these wrongdoings or even subject to punishment.
Firstly, there is no surprise that parents hold the most integral position in the development of children mentally and physically. If young children are provided with a healthy and educational environment in which their mannerisms are well taught, it is likely that they will become ethical adults in the future. In contrast, delinquents frequently share a dissatisfied and discontent childhood where they lack parental guidance. Furthermore, children possess the natural abilities to imitate other’s behaviors, therefore, their acts are potentially a replica of their surrounding environment. For example, no sooner do children witness domestic violence between their parents repetitively than they are more likely to follow suit by resorting to violence to deal with conflicts without negotiating. For this reason, parents should be accountable for their children’s wrongdoings.
The majority of countries worldwide have endorsed legislation which formally recognizes the child’s legal responsibility for their own actions when they are over 18 years old. This is an age from which children have sufficient experience, competence and knowledge to bear all social responsibilities from voting to abiding the national law. Consequently, parental guidance is no longer necessary in the development of those individuals.
In conclusion, when young children violate the law, it is inescapable responsibility for their parents to take until their children come of age when they are enough mature and able to comprehend the implications of their behaviors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81597222222 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28953979283 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5100057835 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.846153846 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398072668533 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139482012328 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963600658817 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247017447874 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502945664887 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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