do you think that physical activities should be introduced to school children on regular basis explain what kind of sports can be introduced.
It is rightly said, that health is wealth and sports as well as games are the best way to keep fit. It is argued by some people that fitness and physical activities should be made a part of regular curriculum basis of the pupils and arrange the some type of sports in schools for growth of health. I think it is right for school children. It is due to fact that, there are many beneficial reasons behind this statement. I will elaborate it in upcoming paragraphs.
to commence with, first and foremost; games also play a significant role in human life. Even sports as well as academic also important. Academies knowledge makes people successful on the contrary games help us to stay fit and fine. consequently sports help us to keep fit. To epitone, in contemporary era obesity is a major problem of every person. Due to the fact that children and youngsters mostly spend their time to watch watch movies, playing games, listening music and so on. As a result they become overweight. Apart from that they become a coach potatoes. Due to this they faced many health issues. It is rightly said that a sound mind lives in a sound body. In addition to that these activities also improve our behaviour as well as skills. when children take part in school games they also gain their abilities such as a coordination, corporation, team work as well as motivation. sometimes, pupils not taking the burden of their study and also spend their time on their books as well as a homework. These kind of children after become a bookworm. So schools should be take measure to handle this problem and arranged some kind of extra curricular activities.
moreover there are many different kind of sports which should be provided by schools to the pupils. But it depends on the infrastructure of the school. If the schools has a enough space as well as play ground and many games can be started like cricket hockey, football as well as so on. among with study children can also improve their self-confidence. If schools has no big playground they can start indoor games. These games also include the people and become self confident. For instance a very popular indoor game is chess. It is extremely exciting and best way to refresh our mind. To explain that when student takes part in chess and other type of indoor games. They became self dependent as well as they do not depend on other for non stop as a result they become self confident and always ready to do something alone without others quotes for stop consequently all type of games refresh our body and helped in our mental growth.
To recapitulate, I think that, commerce schools as well as administration of school should be arranged and involved some kind of games of the school children because these sports and the people to do something different as well as stay fit and healthy and improved brain development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2360.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 502.0 315.596192385 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70119521912 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57304519556 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458167330677 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 16.0721442886 193% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.7043294069 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1290322581 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1935483871 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22580645161 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228031779718 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571029168507 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750897758193 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174978488592 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551496387248 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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