Each year, the crime rate increase. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this in criminal activity?
It is true that the number of offenders have risen for many years due to both social and psychological issues, which takes place in home and society. This easy will look at the reasons behind this approach and providing some practical solutions to discuss this major concern more effectively.
The first reason for criminal tendency is that unwanted relationship between people especially among children. In other words, children from broken or problematic family usually, create many issues at home and school owing to lack of attention from their parents. As a result, they create an unusual companionship with other problematic friends and started to do some illicit activities like alcoholism, drugs, shop picking and so on. Moreover, lack of security services are also a big concern in the society. In fact, the police sometimes ignore many criminals who usually create problems in the community. Consequently, they have no fear or panic against the law and order which would lead to them worst situation.
However, there are some possible solutions which can be tackled easily. First, both parents and teachers should play a responsible role to avoid certain circumstances like an unwanted peer relationship with criminals. If find anything related to criminal task among children, the parents and educators never shy away from inculcating them in a right way. If possible arrange any experienced counsellor for a greater advice. Furthermore, the government should conduct awareness programme both school and community which would be controlled the number of criminals in society.
In conclusion, criminal activity has skyrocketed due to lack attention from family and school, but this could be restricted or control easilywhen parents take proper measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82340630099 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9819924521 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103231810956 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334955935051 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383383142034 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764536689804 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419041286559 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.