Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth.
Do you agree or disagree?
A person is incomplete if her mind is empty of knowledge, those needed to make out sense of the world. That is why, today, it is widespread argued that education must be free for anyone regardless her social status. I outline and endorse this thinking because being a schooled person has social and individual advantages.
First, there is no discussion on the fact that the more educated a society is, the more advanced and strong its economy would be. The building blocks of a competitive economy definitely are its citizens, those who have been educated in a wide range of fundamental matters (law, politics, financial and the like), able to understand how the complex economic and political system works. Thus, offering free of charge education to the community is an long-term investment, which help to push forward the country's economy resulting in an increase of its GDP (Growth Domestic Product). In Canada, for instance, where the education at all levels is free, the GDP is the highest of North America.
Secondly, it is clear that to reach a fulfillment stage in life all people should attend at least the secondary school. Certain skills such as creativity, artistic or musical ear are only developed and mastered if people attend the school. So, if there is no fee to be educated in such important areas, everyone would be clearly happier and fulfilled, making their life enjoyable and with a purpose. As well as, being a educated person make people less vulnerable, so it would be difficult to manipulate or persuade them in unequal scenarios such as singing a loan agreement at the bank, for example.
To sum up, the act of acquired essential education should be free for all people worldwide. It represents an intrinsic part of human being that brings great benefits not only for the whole community but also to each individual who has the gift to receive education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, at least, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92163009404 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67827201516 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592476489028 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4668871094 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.769230769 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253485807597 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891236686179 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550278729726 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151149251325 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333225981349 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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