Education used to be a short period of training, but today, people treat it like a lifelong practice. Do you agree or disagree?
Education is a big concern for many people, so there are many opinions about how to learn? It is true that increasingly people choose to learn throughout life rather than limited period to earn qualifications. I completely agree with the idea that education is more likely to be a lifelong pursuit.
The main reasons for promoting lifelong quest of knowledge are to keep up the constant development of society and to satisfy desires. Living in a ever-changing modern society, reeducation seems to be an urgent need throughout one’s working life, if don’t want to fall behind peers. Therefore, anyone who is interested in gaining a better position or needs to make sure that he is on the path to improvement. It is certain that the knowledge learned in school is not sufficient for the job and life, which changes every day. Not only will an individual learn for employment opportunities, but also will learn to satisfy other desires, ranging from self-expression, individuality to fulfilment of their own dreams, such as painting, music, history…
It is clear that, learning conditions and opportunities are increasingly improved, consequently, the time, location and learner constraints being transcended in the near future. Because of the acceleration of scientific and technological progress, people are given learning opportunities in different places at home, at work or distance learning through online courses. People can study at any time they want, such as evenings and weekends, without being restricted to the regular school hours. That is to say it brings the initiative to learner especially busy people. With the above advantages, I believe learning can occur for everyone: the working people, parents with childcare responsibilities, the disabled, the elderly and children.
Considering the discussed points, it is fair to say that the benefits of lifelong trainings are far more remarkable, and prolonged education opportunities increasingly easier in a modern society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, such as, it is true, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48231511254 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23042806309 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617363344051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.8666833709 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.153846154 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114024653811 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458103545132 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642840271509 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081886553379 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642401327962 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.