The Environment is in great danger from Mankind. In your opinion, what can be done to deal with the enviromental issues we face today
Hardly a day goes by without the subject of dirty environment. A lot of companies around the world are thinking about ways to sort out this danger problem. I am absolutely sure that out environment is over-polluted by the human being. Our planet runs out of oil and gas, Probably, in 60 years there will no more necessary resources. For this huge reason we should use renewable sources of power such as wind, solar and others. In this essay I want to come up with a plan of our future.
Firstly, one way to combat this problem would be to deal with nuclear power. At the moment nuclear stations generate the cheapest power in the world. But it is still the most dangerous power on the Earth, because of its instate conditions. Anyway, we should not put up with it. For beginning we should think over automation of nuclear industry, which will help to avoid mistakes by the people. After that we can get rid of oil, gas and other resources. For example, in Netherlands almost ninety percents of all electricity are generated by the nuclear industry. In 2001 they dealed with automation process and in this day citizens have the cheapest electricity in the world.
Secondly, the alternative way to solve the problem would be to make a lot of wind-driven generators, since it is more safe way of energy. Even small wind can be used by the generator. Brighton, which is located in England is a good example of the alternative sources of power, Their generators produce at least 50 percents of electricity every day.
Taking everything in account, it must be said that our environment has big problems, because of humans. Oil and gas production exert dramatically huge impact for the Earth. To reduce the damage we should not produce our resources anymore.
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- The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Hardly' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
Hardly a day goes by without the subject of di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, at least, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73529411765 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68027453591 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4441702137 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.45 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133665405381 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422028757051 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367256384282 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771021806636 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305938494133 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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