Essay topics: Consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
It is such a phenomenal ripe for the advertisements that we seen on a daily basis. Not only through the traditional publicists such as televison or newspapers, apps for social networking are the most abundant channels that we receive commercial nowadays. Due to the intensified competitions, entrepreneurs tend to overreacting when it comes to promote the merchandise in order to increase their profits.
Urge of purchasing is buried deeply in our subconsciousness along with the satisfaction we enjoyed. Commercial slogans are normally useful and effective for us to catch a glimpse of the commodity, but there is a distinguish between ads which we receiver and encounter.
Back in the days, consumers rarely saw any leaflets outside the supermarkets. With the prosperity of the economy and technology, advertisements become harder to refuse. One cannot watching a movie or video online before seeing several ads promoted by the platform and the network opreaters. Social platforms such as Facebook and others are preserving their monopoly by spreading customized ads in order to increase their profits. Consumerism are definitely one of the unhealthy consequence this ads crazy burgeoning brings. People with poor judgment and rationality are dividing large amounts of money to joint this fanatical activity.
It is crucial to put actions into solving this problem, such as screening the advertisements with higer standers to check for false advertising or cutting the hourly percentage of ads we unwilling encountered with. Creating a measuring system for customer to give opinions about the promotion they recieve is also a great way to leaning on the unwelcome ads.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... glimpse of the commodity, but there is a distinguish between ads which we receiver and encou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42528735632 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18650045918 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639846743295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3492930547 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102273189685 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358609580804 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371401423325 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582212129052 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317567653092 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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