Euthanasia is no longer acceptable in modern society.” Discuss the solutions to accept this fact.
The world has become a globalized village and it brought many practices in the medical field. there are many practices done by the physicians as well as medical professionals for the sake of patient or may be for their family such an euthanasia. This essay will discuss why it is not acceptable in the society and the reasons for it.
At the outset, there are myriad of reasons to bring euthanasia in the medical practices. one of the main reason was the lack of advanced patient care services and inadequate treatment for the dreaded disease. For instance, there were no treatments for dangerous diseases like cancer and HIV, during that time euthanasia was the only solution for the doctors to help the patients from sufferings with the permission of patients and their relative, which can help the patient to die without suffering more.
However, in the 21st century, there are more advanced technologies and treatments for the dreaded diseases and their early detection and management, can help the people to suffer less than before. For instance,advanced medical laboratory facilities can help to detect the diseases and treat at the early stages, which can help to increase the life expectancy of the people, so that euthanasia can be avoided.
In conclusion, even euthanasia was a done with the permission of a patient, the doctor is not the one who can take the life from earth, they can only help the patient to support their life as much as they can. In my opinion, with all the facilities we have in the society, we should protect the life we have in the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85977859779 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69783844341 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509225092251 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9757531219 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.7 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891229620315 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425723728168 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587680857516 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558511463121 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368749289173 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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