Euthanasia is no longer acceptable in the modern society. Discuss the solutions to accept this fact.
Nowadays, the moot question “whether euthanasia is an acceptable phenomenon or not?” has become a long-running dispute among the people all over the world. It is a widely held view that in some cases euthanasia is highly beneficial when people are suffering from unpleasant circumstances, whereas some efficient solution must be considered to persuade others to accept this fact.
To begin with, it is a common belief that trying to survival plays a vital role in everybody’s life. First and foremost is that euthanasia is intensively against the ethical principles, the religious, and legal factors. Secondly, it can be argued that in all dimensions of religious, we do not have this right to declare death for others, even if done voluntarily. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that a group of Socialists, working at prestigious university conducted that taking away individuals that have been suffering from some disease, such as coma is seen as an unethical behavior.
However, there is no doubt that euthanasia provides some people with various positive points and they believe that numerous solutions should be considered to convince the opponents of this phenomenon. One possible approach is to raise the public awareness, which shows how demanding is the life of those people who are suffering from mental disorders or are disabled. Moreover, those who sacrifice their life through euthanasia that so-called mercy-kill will have this opportunity to get rid of painful as well as incurable diseases.
To recapitulate, I entirely believe that euthanasia can be beneficial for those who are suffering from this issue. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08196376512 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.9169869468 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.636363636 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17934090894 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629487825341 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606686274151 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106905339437 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06676971328 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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